Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Foggy memory !

यों तो अग्रेजी में हाथ बहुत साफ़ नहीं है ,या यूँ कह लीजिये कि बहुत तंग है ! मगर आज बस, परखने के लिए एक अंगरेजी पोएम लिखी, इसे भी ब्लॉग पर ठेल रहा हूँ आपके सुझाओ की प्रतीक्षा में ;

I know, your life is full of bumblebee,
But, your love is everything for me .
do you remember, eh, Mate ?
you are so hard, so hard to forget.
I miss you, I wanna tell you,
for epoch,an old barn falling apart!
across the inner circle of my heart !!

Once, without knowing its fate,
You wrote ‘l’ ‘o’’v’’e’, four alphabets.
willingly or unwillingly don’t know,
Like on the keffiyeh of fresh snow.
And gladness filled
every ounce of your art !
across the inner circle of my heart !!

At middle of the circle on a hoarding,
It looks funny, but you had a boarding.
and you mentioned innocently there,
“I love you so much, oh, my dear”
You killed me loftly-softly
with a dart !
across the inner circle of my heart !!

You sat down slowly and began to paint,
and you colored entire my heart, ain’t ?
why painting turned suddenly so bad ?
Remember the good times that we had?
you’re equally beautiful,
‘m smart !
across the inner circle of my heart !!

Without any hesitation and malice
you are always welcome at my place
no levy, no toll-tax, no gate even
anytime, as the road is open 24x7
you can joy drive in
with your cart !
across the inner circle of my heart !!

14 comments:

डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री मयंक said...

You sat down slowly and began to paint,
and you colored entire my heart, ain’t ?
why painting turned suddenly so bad ?
Remember the good times that we had?
you’re equally beautiful,
‘m smart !
across the inner circle of my heart !!

NICE...NICE....NICE.

अमरेन्द्र नाथ त्रिपाठी said...

हुजूर !
अंगरेजी मेरी कमजोर है क्या कहूं ............

'अदा' said...

Godiyal ji,
Hats off to your new adventure !!

The inner circle of your heart has got so many things to share....
Your poem has got perfect blend of everything...very good choice of words, emotion and the ideal situation...what else is needed......Tell!! Tell!!
I am really impressed...!!

बेचैन आत्मा said...

Wao.....
What nice Foggy memory!
अंधड़ में ऐसा भी होता है!

डॉ टी एस दराल said...

वाह जी वाह, क्या कमाल किया है।
बस इसका हिन्दी अनुवाद और पेश करें।

शरद कोकास said...

वाह ..अंग्रेज़ी का कोई कवि सम्मेलन होता हो तो वहाँ यह कविता हिट हो जायेगी ।

cmpershad said...

why painting turned suddenly so bad ?

your panting made me feel sad:)

Mithilesh dubey said...

nice poems , but its realy beyond of my thinkig, your selection of words is too good.... keep it up. We steal waiting next poems ........

पं.डी.के.शर्मा"वत्स" said...

वाह्! क्या लाजवाब रचना है !
वैसे लगे हाथ इसका हिन्दी में भी अनुवाद कर देते तो हमें भी समझ में आ जाती :)

योगेन्द्र मौदगिल said...

अब तो अनुवाद कर ही डालो भाई जी....

पी.सी.गोदियाल said...

गदगद हुआ सच में, Only can say thanks a lot to all of you !

Shashidhar said...

bahisaab...very good...mind blowing! aap kuchh bhi likhte hai. laajbaab hota hai..

पी.सी.गोदियाल said...

THANKS YOU SO MUCH SASHI BHAI SAHAAB !

Udan Tashtari said...

शानदार गौदियाल साहब..ये प्रयास भी अति सफल रहा. इसे जारी रखा जाये.